Your Zanpaukto!
#1
Posted 07 September 2010 - 09:07 PM
Add anything you'd like. Name, description, Shikai, Bankai, etc.
Here's mine.
Shikai:
Name: Bachiatarigami (Fallen Angel)
Description: Looks like a normal Shinto Katana, with two cresting angels on the hilt.
When someone falls to it in battle, their soul is absorbed by the blade. I can release these souls at will, and when I do, they increase the cutting power of my blade tenfold for every soul released.
While my blade is in this form, my speed is increased far beyond that which is comprehendible.
While in Shikai, I am able to release "Soulstorm". This causes ten-thousand souls to be released from my blade, and trap my opponent and I within a raging storm. Neither of us can escape until one of us is killed. For every second within this storm, my speed drastically increases, and I'm able to use the souls as weapons, attacking from all directions.
Bankai:
Name: Bachiatarigami Shirohasuokami (Fallen Angel, the White Lotus Emperor)
Description: Looks like it's Shikai form, however the blade has been elongated and is now midnight black.
When activated, the Soulstorm ceases, and all souls are absorbed back into my blade, then all simultaneously released, as well as forcing my own soul through the blade.
This allows me one attack, capable of cutting through any defense with immense power. If more than one attack is used, my entire soul will have been used up, and I die.
Now it's your turn.
EDIT: Typo.
#2
Posted 09 September 2010 - 12:07 PM
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Add anything you'd like. Name, description, Shikai, Bankai, etc.
Here's mine.
Shikai:
Name: Bachiatarigami (Fallen Angel)
Description: Looks like a normal Shinto Katana, with two cresting angels on the hilt.
When someone falls to it in battle, their soul is absorbed by the blade. I can release these souls at will, and when I do, they increase the cutting power of my blade tenfold for every soul released.
While my blade is in this form, my speed is increased far beyond that which is comprehendible.
While in Shikai, I am able to release "Soulstorm". This causes ten-thousand souls to be released from my blade, and trap my opponent and I within a raging storm. Neither of us can escape until one of us is killed. For every second within this storm, my speed drastically increases, and I'm able to use the souls as weapons, attacking from all directions.
Bankai:
Name: Bachiatarigami Shirohasuokami (Fallen Angel, the White Lotus Emperor)
Description: Looks like it's Shikai form, however the blade has been elongated and is now midnight black.
When activated, the Soulstorm ceases, and all souls are absorbed back into my blade, then all simultaneously released, as well as forcing my own soul through the blade.
This allows me one attack, capable of cutting through any defense with immense power. If more than one attack is used, my entire soul will have been used up, and I die.
Now it's your turn.
EDIT: Typo.
Screenshot or I don't belive you :)
#3
Posted 09 September 2010 - 03:38 PM

You are sadly mistaken if you even think I would show my Bankai to a mortal such as yourself.
#6
Posted 11 September 2010 - 03:04 PM
Description: Its an normal Katana in its unreleased state, the hilt is composed of 2 dragons back to back and you "hold" their tails, in the middle of a blade is an empty line, it gets filled up with my reiatsu for the duration of the battle (Think Hinataro's Zanpakutoh in a way) with an blackish substance, when its at full, I may release it to Shikai.
Shikai
Name: Grusomme Nidhogg
Description: Turns into an double edged ax, the new power it obtains from its unreleased form is simple, anything reasonable it cuts gets burned, no, it isn't a huge fire that envelops the foe within 3 seconds, but a minor burn that grows slowly over time, if left alone for an hour, it will envelop the foe.
Bankai
Name: Havets fyrste, Nidhogg
Description: Nidhogg grows into an monstrosity, and an black dragon head is formed at the end of the axe, inside the "mouth" lies the deadly blade waiting, whenever Nidhogg makes direct contact with the enemy and wounds it, the attacked person's Reiatsu will siphon out of him and into Nidhogg itself. The more Reiatsu consumed this way, the more powerful Nidhogg becomes, you may check how powerful Nidhogg is by it eyes, when they glow red, its filled. And im left with a choice:
A. Continue to wield Nidhogg in its ultimate form.
B. Unleash a monstrous strike at the enemy, this strike cuts through most normal defenses (unlike Apoc's that cut's through ANY defenses) and if it makes physical contact with the enemy, fills them with boiling water on the inside, giving them an painful and cruel death, any enemy killed this way will have its Reiatsu sucked into Nidhogg, improving its power in its unreleased state, this will also turn Nidhogg back to its unreleased state and drain me of 20% of my remaining Reiatsu.
It takes around 15 minutes for Nidhogg to reach Shikai by filling the gauge, and another 10 minutes to fill Havets Fyrste, Nidhogg with Reiatsu in order to unleash the final attack, (Think, against powerful foes I might not manage to hit them that often, but when I do I drain oh so much more Reiatsu)
Name inspired by the Nordic dragon of legend, Nidhogg. All abilities were though of by me.
#7
Posted 11 September 2010 - 03:28 PM
#8
Posted 11 September 2010 - 03:32 PM
I kinda liked yours, 2, until I saw the bankai, it just seemed to.. weaken you, in a way.
"Hey, I can stand in this soulstorm for 20 seconds and I'll move around the speed of light, but if I wait 40 seconds im twice as fast as the speed of light! Yet im still going to ruin this and release 1 powerful attack that will half way kill me and if I actually do miss with it im an damn easy kill", + the whole idea of draining souls kinda... crashed with the whole Shinigami consept of Bleach (You live for one reason, to save and maintain souls, so WHY THE HELL would you kill them and devour them?!)
#9
Posted 11 September 2010 - 03:34 PM
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Hahah, I don't know why, but everytime I watch an anime, I have to imagine myself in it.
#10
Posted 11 September 2010 - 03:40 PM
#11
Posted 11 September 2010 - 03:46 PM
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Lol @ your Naruto one xD
#12
Posted 11 September 2010 - 04:07 PM
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"Hey, I can stand in this soulstorm for 20 seconds and I'll move around the speed of light, but if I wait 40 seconds im twice as fast as the speed of light! Yet im still going to ruin this and release 1 powerful attack that will half way kill me and if I actually do miss with it im an damn easy kill", + the whole idea of draining souls kinda... crashed with the whole Shinigami consept of Bleach (You live for one reason, to save and maintain souls, so WHY THE HELL would you kill them and devour them?!)
#13
Posted 11 September 2010 - 04:25 PM
And my roleplaying character is an Espada, so he really doesn't give a fuck. He has Shikai and Bankai, because in life he was a Shinigami.
#14
Posted 11 September 2010 - 04:34 PM
#15
Posted 11 September 2010 - 04:38 PM
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It's Sonido. And 15 minutes? Not long enough. Bleach episodes have at least 30 minutes of filler.
#16
Posted 11 September 2010 - 04:43 PM
#17
Posted 11 September 2010 - 05:45 PM
#18
Posted 11 September 2010 - 05:46 PM
And it'd just be like Ryuujin Jakka
#19
Posted 11 September 2010 - 06:01 PM
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And it'd just be like Ryuujin Jakka
When I read that, I instantly thought of the S?kyoku. Feel free to write it out and post it here ;D
#20
Posted 11 September 2010 - 06:36 PM
and the two ? is the o with a line over
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